Long Time No Post, shall we look at poems?
I haven’t written on this in a while, and now I will be trying a new approach. Instead of using this as a journal, I shall use this to share my writings, poems, and beliefs. Criticism is always excepted!
Here are a few poems I wrote:
The Space of Mine
(for MySpace lovers)
What is it about this
Site
That makes people go crazy?
This simple minded idea
Of
Talking to friends
Has blown off the chart
Why?
Well,
It could be the idea of a certain friend
Leading his friends
To a lead site
Where the space of theirs
Is their own space
and No One Elses.
Or it could be due to
The need to keep up with people,
The want of wanting to know,
The endless shower of social knowledge that
Pours off the screen into your brain
Like rain falling into a gutter,
Collecting and connecting,
One drop at a time,
Till a pool of information
Has formed.
Conforming Flight
Laying on the wings of insecurity,
I fly through the air of uncertainty
Until I reach my destination of conformity.
Or maybe your thoughts are hungry for some quotes.
“Change is like shitting; it comes everyday without warning.” -Cody Saunders
“Dramastic!” -Aaron Walton
February 12, 2009 at 6:23 pm
Have you read those poems out loud? Emphasize certain sounds, rhythms, pauses–and you’ll become stage-worthy.